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An updated version of this [link] picture, standing as a splash for my website.

I'm really sorry for the ugly address at the top, but since the original picture is one of my most stolen pieces, I wouldn't dare to post it without a signature. I know it kills the art.

I used some custom galaxy brushes by *Sunira, ~Rabieshund or ~v-k-s for the background.

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:iconstormyhotwolf88:
mmm.... Still had trouble with that (my right) wing huh? I think the angle you did was right, it's just that it looks like there are less feathers on the end then on the other side... and maybe not droop as much... since you have it fan down. Also the feathers are large and round, not thin and sharp as the other side. It bothers me immensely, but the rest is fairly accurate and rendered very well.

Your sense of color is phenomenal and the moon impresses me. The rock isn't as detailed as the figure... compared to the figure it looks under painted but it's not that big of a deal since, the focus is the character. Smoothing it out though would help and not make this look a little rushed.

The words are distracting. You could perhaps make them smaller so that they are still legible but doesn't distract from the focus. Also, I'd say go with a more delicate and scriptive font. I say this because you can use the font to add to the mood that you are going for. Think like... classic music or gentle atmosphere. Kinda makes you feel long and loopy ya know? I like that it's a bit transparent.

In the end, great work, I know you've been at this for a long while.
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:iconpoldallelovesnare:
First and foremost I have to say, the color scheme, especially helps this piece to have a very enchanting and spiritual feel to it. The moon, while looking extremely realistic and detailed, adds to the sense of allure and mysticism coupled with the beautiful, surreal starry sky. The added nebula-like, almost outerspace-like, swirls emphasize the feeling. But it does not feel as if we cannot relate...it is not so far out there that we cannot feel a sense of realism to it. Like a beautiful dream that is still within reach. The realism on the wolf's fur and feathers is positively incredible! The fur texture especially looks as if you could touch it! Though I have to say, perhaps as a note, that the longest feathers [the flight? feathers?] seem almost "flat" compared to the high level of detail on other areas of her body. As well as the scribbles upon the rock add a more abstract or surreal look to it compared to the realism in other parts of the image. This is not necessarily a bad thing though, as it adds to the "fantasy" appearance...blending "art" and "real" together. I like the addition of the words, but wonder if perhaps it would be more poetic to remove the word "can". Over all this is a very amazing piece that really is eye-catching and uplifting. You can feel the character's awe in aura well. It leaves you with a sense of intrigue.
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:icondragonrace:
0.0 she looks so pretty and that pose is amazing:D great work!

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Art rulez:D
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:iconwildrunningwolf:
O___O AMAZING

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what´s Skaret doing?
She´s howling to the moon
Running in the night
Hunting in the forest
And loving TWILIGHT!! xDDD
:iconinumoon03:
o mai, shes beautiful~! awesome work!!

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S+N=<3

"I wanna play a game..."--Jigsaw
:iconjrjay:
:) Ah, finally the finished piece. Nice!
:iconangedecristal:
Very good work ! *w*

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:icontatchu:
An amazing remake.
Mind if I ask, how do you paint the fur?

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Awesome avatar by awesome =griffsnuff <3

*HUGS* TOTAL!
give Tatchu more *HUGS*
:iconreina-kitsune:
Tak tohle je asi obrazek ktery se mi z tve tvorby libi nejvic :D Ta poza, ta kridla *_* Uzasne n_n

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I could have drawn tons of Anime fanart and get tons of favs. The worst fanart would get more favs than any of those pictures I put my soul in, no matter how good they are. However, I still draw what I love. And I :heart: my friends who appreciate it.
:iconeleweth:
To byl ten projekt? :D Moc pěkné, jako vždy :clap: až mi tlama spadla a oči se zakutalely pod stůl :XD:

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Thanks my friend ~Ruchiel for the amazing icons <3 Original art in this icon is by ~EnigmaticPhantasy
:icondemongirl1093:
i'm sorry this gets stolen. you did a beautiful job! i like the tail feathers

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:iconfey-rine:
je to krasa, akorat ty fonty mi k tomu nesedi

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